Make sure to add the #XXXX numbers at the end
Pretty low playtime and I haven't seen you much, maybe once or twice briefly.
I feel like you could try to add a bit more to this part, preferably a paragraph (3 sentences for small, 6-8 for big)
You got one of them wrong but I won't tell you which so you can go look and learn for yourself.
You forgot the NLR part.
Besides the stuff listed above, it's pretty good, slightly bad grammar but it's fine as long as it doesn't interfere with stuff. I'd recommend getting more playtime and changing some things.
You should change up your staff app a bit and once you do please @ me but for now it will be a:
EDIT: He changed the staff app so it's now pretty good, +1